good job.

Hey Timothy~
I think this is really well written! Your flow and rythm is flawless and your rhymes aren't forced! Very heartfelt...keep it up! Don't push yourself so much and the ideas will flow~Holly

Great poem:) I loved it... I hope you will wrigth more so I can read them:)
Do see some of my poems too:) it would meen a lot

That was a very touching poem. I could really feel the emotion in it and the meaning was very clear. I loved it. You obviosly have talent, keep on writing.
Satuxxa

Amazing poem so very well written. Really sweet poem! I can't wait to read more of ur work! Take Care! Brooke

It was really great. The poem was well written and it ryhmes very well. It was really sweet and I really enjoyed reading it. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz comment on my new poem Titled My Story Part II thanks!!!=)

awww very sweet poem....truly loved it...it flowed very well....great job.....

Kalika

wow you're good

Im not into love poems but i thought it was good.

I loved this poem but my faviort part would have to be
When I think of you
I become afraid
I fear you'll reject me
When this infatuation's played...
I like the way you write... yuor Stlye id truely Different...
Xox Sherrie

sorry bout the last line...It should read...
Your stlye is truely different

tht is SO GOOD well done *claps*
xxx

I can tell you really love the person you're talking about....great job....

4/5.

Awww so sweet, deffinatly 5/5
Jen x

i really liked this one. i liiked the repitition.
~Freak~

this was really good, definitely gave it a 5...i love how you brought the goddess of love and beauty into your poem...that was very creative! nice job!

You are so lucky to have such a talent...I see that you're embracing poetry and I am so glad! Thank you for inviting me to read your poetry! I'm adding you to my favorites!