My gosh...gorgous.

Your imagery: flawless
Every line was this set picture of utter beauty and excellent symbolsim.
The title in itself is a beautifully grasped metaphor of nature and environment.
My favorite lines: "Wisp of chilling air on my lips
Sealed with an array of one peppermint kiss.

She is the Goddess, euphoric, in the clouds
The shape surrounding aqueous rain drops."

This had such a lovely, peaceful atmosphere to it. Excellent job.

Amazing Imagery, the first 3 couplets are flawless, and the follow up of the poem is beautiful. I applaud your talent greatly. 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig

Amazing. i loved the imagery in this poem it paints the picture sooo well and just shows total beauty. Good job 5/5
Kate x~x~x

OMG k, I am going to be brutually honest lmao...this is the best poem i have read EVER in this catagory...Your use of words and imagery was like a picture book in my head...amazingly written..loves it
take care always 5/5

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You have amazing use of a vocabulary, unmatched by anybody of your age i have seen on this site.

It's beautiful, and a delicate poem...good flow :) well done.

You have a keen imagination. keep em coming.

That was amazing. 5/5 nice work.

Amazing in all aspects, a wonderfully exquisite image filled poem, bravo!!!

Niice poem.

Lissa

Utterly, indescribably brilliant. As always. And yet again, words fail me. I see no way to better praise your talent as it far surpasses anything my little mind could ever comprehend.
Wishing I had a morsel of your talent,
keep rockin!
Peace, love and empathy.