That was absolutely beautiful! U write so well. You sure have a lot of talent. I loved everything about this poem. I wish I could write like you! Another 5/5!

this is a very well written poem. good job. 4/5.

I really liked it. Good work:)

Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

This isthe most beautiful poem - Five all the way...Lots of talent there my dear.....God Bless.

Love,
Libby

One bumpy line, and the rest is wonderful.

"Yet I had to leave but I left her my love and my heart"

A suggestion to fix it, rewrite it something like "Although I had to leave, I left her my love and my heart"

Yet and but just don't fit so well together in the same line.

I really do love this poem, however.

Great use of vocabulary, and a real nice flow to this one! Keep it up! Sarah-Lou x x x

Wow. beautiful 5/5

MASTERPIECE 5+

One thing...
"The wind howled liked wolves on a hungry chase"
I can only assume you mean "like"

That's all I can really say, your rhyming scheme is very original, a rhythm all it's own. Well done.

Thank you, i didn't realize i wrote "liked" instead of "like."

wow! thats reli beautiful, ur very talented lotsa lv xx

This is one of the best poems i have read on here, it was so passionate and beautiful, all i can say is wow. So original and powerful. you are amazing.

My only suggestion to fix the flow would be one line.

"Yet I had to leave but I left her my love and my heart"
just too many syllables lots of word clutter.
Otherwise amazing!!

i loved this poem, 5/5 for sure, id love if ud check out my poems too!

i loved this poem, 5/5 for sure, id love if ud check out my poems too!

So good! ***** stars for this one... =D please check out my two new poems "Butterflies" and "Me Vs. The Razor Blade" and please comment/vote it would mean so much.. thanks. /september

hej Satuxxa.. is it ok if I ased you for a favour or help.. It's about my friend.. he's trying to write a song and he asked me to write the reast of it and I can't... please answer me back.. thanks a lot

I have to admit i dont really read
love poems but this is the best poem
i mean not love but poem out of all
keep the awsome job
5/5

Very very good poem!Could easily be a song,it's inspirational and rich in description, feelings and imagery!Well done, enjoy your holiday!