What he did

by jake   Apr 12, 2005



all I saw was you
your black hair dancing in the wind
your smile that lites up the darkest of places
your voice like a muse
you gave inspiration to live
and then he took your life
with what he did
he said he needed you
and then you killed your self
all I could do was call the cops
he beat me blue
before he was arrested
your father should be shot
but all I can do is hope the men
return the favor of
what he did to you

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  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey gd poem!its filled wif so much emotions!well if that chix got bushed by her father i reckon he should root in hell!like every other dad that hits there daughter/son....hope everything is okay n im here if u need 2 talk!keep shining!...josie....

  • 19 years ago

    by jake

    thank you tylor and starburst

  • 19 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really sad. . . but still loving. . . keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

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