um interesting~!!!!!!!!!!!!~
new style i like that*

great poem, i like the way you have written this...

it's spelled You're (instead of your)
and impatient* , but other than those errors, not to bad...shows how strong the diffrences are between 2.

<3 Heather

Wow, simple but very thoughtful. 5/5

idk why theres a ac on this poem its so old but it wont let me update it sorry yall