well I would bet that THERE IS A LADY IN BLACK i could not read this poem without remembering what it feels like to be in love ...you done good 5

That was so beautiful and sad at the same time! U are an amazing poet! Keep posting! Brooke 5/5

I really liked this poem, It made me think you could have been taking about a lost love or a trip from to much drugs... Anyways great poem
Xox Sherrie

amazing poem....it's sad but very well written....

Kalika

I enjoyed this 5/5

I really like the concept of this poem...

great write.

She loved me once
I loved her back
She owns my heart
My lady in black

I like that line, well done.

not your best but still pretty good 4/5. i feel it was a bit too short, a bit rushed.
~Freak~

beautiful ending! i just can't get enough of your writing technique! keep it up! 5/5

I really like your style...Great job! 5/5!

Woop! thas well good! its sad mind :| but good all the same :)

keep hope

Matt