Comments : Trophies for Bullets

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    CONGRADULATIONS ON THE WINNING OF THE WEEKLY CONTEST JUST BE YOURSELF AND YOUR AUDIENCE WILL FIND YOU. IT WORKED FOR BOB DYLAN ILL LEAVE YOU WITH A FEW LINES FROM HIS SONG ITS ALRIGHT MA IM ONLY BLEEDING

    Advertising signs that con you
    Into thinking you're the one
    That can do what's never been done
    That can win what's never been won
    Meantime life outside goes on
    All around you.

    You lose yourself, you reappear
    You suddenly find you got nothing to fear
    Alone you stand with nobody near
    When a trembling distant voice, unclear
    Startles your sleeping ears to hear
    That somebody thinks
    They really found you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    lmao, best acrostic (sorry about spelling) poem I have ever read... loved your wording. I haven't got much else to say, just that some poets need to stop inflating their ego and partake in what this site is about- reading and growing with poetry.
    Well done!
    :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely done Kaitlin!!!