I see a new style for you...? I like...Nice write.... I have a poem similar to this....not posted anymore....Maybe I'll see if I can stir it up so yyou can see....Very good poem ann.....5/5 :)

Excellent write, Ann. Words Straight from the heart! Great piece of writing. Keep writing like this.
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

Line 8 should be tears, but other than that, beautifully written as usual hun. It really seemed like I was writing it =) Much love 5/5

Heather Craig

nice job Ann, dreams are what keep us going, and I hope I or you ever get too old to dream, to want, and remember the good times in life. keep up the great writing and sharing with us, your friends as ever Harry

that should be never , not ever get tooo old. harry

thank you so much for your comments.

=)

I also enjoy your poetry.

OMG... OMG... Ann?..
Wonderful style and I love it:X
Beautiful heart and words, gril!!
Impressive... Wow!!! *5/5*
*hugs to ya* God Bless!
Very Nice WrittenXD

oxoxoxo

omGG....dat was so great well done Mwazii XOxox Stephy :)

i like it

~*MIKE*~

our dreams is what makes us what we are to a certain extent, and a dream of love is never a wasted dream, because it gives us that ceartain pleasure for a few short moments to really be at peace. good job Ann. keep up the good thoughts and who knows maybe one day that special love will once again come to your heart. as always Harry

A very ambigiuos poem...so raw!! I loved it.
So thought provoking.

Your friend
Hayley

Such a sweet poem! Well done, you're good keep writing!

This is a amazing poem i loved it so keep up the good work
luv sam xxx

this is so good i love it

Beautifully penned! Loved it from beginning to end, passionately written~Holly