oh my! great poem, very well done.
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

Great job expressing your true feelings for this guy. He must be a very special guy. I love the part about the smell I can always remember a guy by the smell of his cologne. Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke

Would you take a look at Set Free I have finally posted a new one! Thanx!

Sweet! I love the smell part, just like Brooke does too. Very ´beautiful. I dont know what to say. Keep these poems coming, Ill be checking more out when i have the time.
Satuxxa

AWWW! Hun this is so sweet! I feel the same way about my boy friend rite now! Thanx for the comment on my poem! Ur a great writer!
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXOXO

thats so sweet and you're a really good writer

this is good i really liked this part "Without your beautiful voice, Forcing me to make a choice;" i like it but u repeated beautiful voice so maybe u should change dat

well what5 can I say i got lost through all the without and you seem to be redundant in every word. Going on like a broken record. If you shortened it I think it woukld have more power to the poem but nice try.

Great poem! Very well expressed :)

Very nice poem sounds like you really care about someone, need to work on the flow a bit, but other than that it was beautiful.

hey I changed my name - It's Amanda Linzi :)

good poem, I liked it. must be a special guy, lol.. is it me? :p

Touching poem...but i'd have to agree, it seems to be a little too redundant...I liked the "without your..." part being repeated...a few parts could perhaps be edited out. But it's your poem. Do whatever you feel is best. ;)

aww this is a sweet poem. i loved it

Aw this is really sweet....im glad you got some1 to love and who ever this was for....lucky person!! 5/5

This was awesome 5/5 definatly the only part i saw a problem with was this

Without feeling your life,
I try, but I just can't strife.

it dosn't really make sense because im pretty sure strife is a noun not a verb and strife is a bad thing, defined as like a bitter conflict or i think a problem between people that don't exactly like each other so that dosn't really make any sense i know there's only like 3 or 4 words that rhyme with life but i bet you could find one that makes sense so i'd redo that part but yeah great poem 5/5

Sooo sweet. loved everything about the poem. your really good at writting and you put so much feeling into ur poetry. keep up the good work. 5/5