Smile

by Samantha   Apr 15, 2005


Smile, the world's your own to hold;
As it is for the young, and for the old.
For the timid, for the bold,
For those with silver, those with gold.

Smile; make this day the best;
Be your very happiest,
Never let your spirit rest,
Follow the sun past the west.

Smile, there's so much to look forward for;
Life has so many open doors,
Every water has its shore,
Every day holds so much more.

Smile, I'll be here to make sure you do.
I'll always be here for you.
My friendship, my love - always true.
My faith in you cannot be moved.

© Likuid Pain
aka Samantha Tulgetske

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Omg this is amazing. like the entire thing. but i esp like the first stanza and the water having a shore part. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This poem was a very nice, optimisitic point to me. I enjoy the full meaning of it. Everyone should smile much more than they do. Like someone used to say to me when I frowned "One day your face will lock up and you'll be stuck like that forever." XP

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awww...good poem... very inspiring! thanks!!!

    hugs,

    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Light poem with a comforting message.. i really like it in contrast with a lot of depressive poems featured on here,..

    As it is for the young, and for the old.

    i dont know the grammatical correctness, but my mind wants to change it to: as it is for the young, so is it for the old,..
    this of course would interrupt the flow, but it just seems like that'd fit better.. i dunn0.. the second line in the second stanza,.. that rhyme seems forced.. other than that, the poem is light and airy; doesnt go too deep and has a simplistic appeal.. good read.. pZ out

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    that was a very nice poem! i loved the way it flowed it was very good! keep it up! and take care. :)

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