thats so sad, but i understand it well and what it means and eveything, great poem luv ya sam xox

I love the end it's very powerful... But overall it was amazing.. Def. a 5/5
(take care)(always) and keep your head up.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

dam, awesome job, reminds me of so many of my own poems 5/5

wow.....i dont know what else to say....thats awsome!
luv yas
sammy

Thats awsome work! I really like your style!!!!! You have a way about words, use it

wow thats really gd! if ya hav time plz chek out summa mine! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

you did a great job
you had to have reached deep down
inside you are a true poet

OMg..Luved it well done keep it Up XOxxox Stephy :)

When you cry, its from your eyes
But my tears flow from my veins.

That was my favorite line. The poem overall was absolutely wonderful, brilliant, and depressing at the same time.. awesome job..

When you cry, its from your eyes
But my tears flow from my veins.

That was my favorite line. The poem overall was absolutely wonderful, brilliant, and depressing at the same time.. awesome job..

Omg this poem was absolutely brilliant
I love it, your very intelligent in what you write
5/5

And like the person who commented above me, that bit
When you cry, its from your eyes
But my tears flow from my veins.
was defiently the best bit

Bea-utiful! wonderful wrighting thank you for commenting on my work to as long as you give me advice ill do the same for you

dude- i really like this poem. do you really cut? not a critical question- just that yeah thats kind of what its like. i especially like the part about crying from your veins. im glad u liked mine too. im gonna read more of yours- theyre good.

this is really good. nice flow. it was sad and full of emotion. ncie choice of wors. keep your head up stay strong. and thanks for commenting on my poem! take care. much love.

Powerful.
Good Read,

Failed.

Wow, that was soo good! I love this poem it speaks for its self. Excellent excellent work. I totally loved it. >3jess

Awesomeness.....this is probably the best poem I have read in a long time...thanks for everything..Keep on writing!

I liked it, I think it's good. Keep it up!

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

wow...i really like that...5/5...you have a lot of talent...thank you for the comment and vote on my poem...it really means a lot...i wish i coud help you somehow with cutting....i used to ...i cut my last time two weeks ago..it isn't healing very good...i got caught...it made me mad but it helped me a lot..i had to stop cutting b/c people were looking...i hope you can stop....just keep writing it helps a lot...try to stop...it'll be the best decision you can make....my support goes out to you...keep up writing

This is really good, I like it alot.By the way thank u for commenting on my poem.