i realy cant write poems that well but i spent forever on this one so please comment!!! thx!!

awesome poem sweetie!

The thing that makes this sweeter is the fact its true! Returning the favor from the forum
5/5
~Emmy

hmm.. the only thing is, using w/ instead of the full word.. but it was detailed and the rhymes were good..
:)

5/5

That was really well written. I really liked
"you are my one and only,
w/ you I'm never lonely,
always you were there for me,
please say you always will be..."
It was very emotional. You probably put a lot of thought into this and I think it paid off. Thanks for the read and for reading/critiquing my work and I hope to read more soon. You might enjoy my poem "Her Last Kiss". Check it out and reply. Rbmo401.

great poem, great rhyme, and very meaningful. 5/5

Full of true emotions! Very well done! It's great when you find that special love! Thanks for the comments on my poems! Take Care! Brooke~

Heartfelt and sincere, this piece was full of emotions that were brought out by the language you used.

Keep Writing
Nici

Great poem...
Thanx for commenting on my poem... I appriciate it:)
Love,
Line

I loved the rhymes. Great poem. It was full of emotion. Keep writing! You're talented!

-Ice

I liked this one. But you should realy spell out your words. W/ doesnt look good.

so sweet. good job

this is really sweet. i added you to my favourites, so keep these poems coming!

You are really lucky to have a guy like him to stay with you through this so called "shit " you put him though.It had alot of emotion
I really liked it 5/5
April`

very nice wrting u show very emotional feelings in ur poem

Antoher good one, you seem lucky to have found someone, don't take it for granted. Take care.

thats so awesome!! glad you have one in mind!! this was very good, you kept the idea and matched it up! great job i loved it!5/5

aww love is a beautiful thing. just like this poem. 5/5 on all of them!

Trailed off very slightly in poetic terms towards the end...notice: Very slightly. But again, was meant to say something to someone and again did so very well. Best of luck in your future writing endeavours...you have a solid base.

aww thats such an awesome poem. i bet hes an awesome guy for standing by your side