Comments : Lonely Flower

  • 18 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    freakin awsome poem. great. you have amazing talent in you.keep up this great job. hope that your ok? Much Luv

    Nick

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    good poem. I feel sorry for you if you truly feel alone, I feel like that now and then, and i see it has a good thing sometime, cuz when people get close to me, they usaly get involved into things that might get them killed, so i constantly worry about my friends. well, good poem, by the way i apoligize again about the whole coment thing on Angel of love and hate, im sort of over it now, it still hurts. but i need to get along in life, theyd want me to, right? o i put a new comment on angel of love and hate, fyi.

    Peace out, havic in,
    Lance

  • 18 years ago

    by stephalee

    this is so pretty such a good poem!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    wow this is deep!!! nice, i really like it.!

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    wow, this is such a wonderful poem! i never would have thought of a flower and personifying it. i like the part with it being tied to the ground or somthing like that. this was a great poem! stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    AntiSocial16
    ps: thanks for the comment on my "Broken Life" poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    an inspiring poem i found this to be,
    a thing like it i didn't expect to see.

    i speak for all when i say,
    continue to write,
    so in your poems we may delight...

  • 18 years ago

    by Cimara

    awesome! so sad but written so beautifully!

  • 18 years ago

    by Diego Moreno

    hey...awesome poem..i love it...pretty kool...keep up girl.....well lates and take care...holla back girl....bye...

  • 18 years ago

    by Diego Moreno

    oh and umm... later i'll check ur other poems...cus is late righ now where i am...so anyways bye...and ummm....take care...bye...lates....

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    This poem was great, good rhymes and flow. A pleasure to read, good job.
    Plz, check out mine when you have time, especially "From angel to demon" I really want ur opinion on that one, thx alot.
    Keep up the good work and if u need to talk to someone u can e-mail me:)
    Take care*hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    I love its originality. Great job on this one, and thanks for your comment. 5/5

    ~rolo

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    Very nice poem, dear. It's excellent. I love how you gave a flower your emotions. Very creative. 5/5

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy

    Man, that was one of the best poems I have read in awhile on here! Seriously, it was not in prose, but there were many lines that compared you to the flower and it was so well put I got shivers! You deserved the 13 5's u have to date!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    thank you so much for sharing this
    victoria. I love your poems.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Interesting view. I don't know how you found it but isn't that the sign of talent? Nice poem. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby Bridges


    I can tell you why you write,,,it's a expression of gift, wanting to share and most of all it's you............

    Please keep writing and spreading your ideals....At the same time compliment yourself..................

    Shelby