Awesome Nick! i loved it! keep em comin! i love to read your work. my friend said that you're a really good writer, and she likes to read your poems.
keep writing, and comment on mine!
much love and a hug,
Krista J.

This is a very good poem. I can visualize it so well. 5 for you! And thanks for your comments:)

Eden

EWW!!! SCARY!

Amazing Imagery Nick. Nice job. 5

love
Heather

Amazing poem you have a great imagination!

take care

Awsome poem
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~~(~~Morana~~)~~