Hey Rachel
OMG that poem was so sad it brought tears to my eyes! Very well written! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

Very sad poem and well written.

take care

This one was good too

WOW!WOW!WOW! This was really amazing! It was so sad too! You are a really great writer! Can't wait to read more of your stuff....
Love alwayz......
Haily
XOXOXOXO

beautiful! wow, i loved this poem a lot!! this was such an excellent poem. it was so sad and it almost made me cry. i just cant believe how beautiful that was, it was so creative and sad. wow, wonderful work, keep it up!!

~*LorienElf*~

Wow i'm about to cry.... I loved how it started it off happy and then just flipped and became so sad! I thought was amazing and i can't even suggest anything because it was flawless....5*

that is so sad, but really good

*clap*clap*clap* Really wonderful poem..two thumbs up!..
I Honestly like it..And I just want you to know you're one of my favorites..
All the best to You!..
;)

beautiful poem with an excellent flow

Aww this poem is so sad. Very well written though. Hope your ok. >3jess

Awe, that was really sad, beautifully written, great job keep it up!

this poem is amazing its so well written i cried! thankyou for commenting on my work i really apreciate it, your a greta writer obviously so keep on truckin....