How original! I really like it! I don't think I know of anyone else on here who writes about their love of swimming! It's real good that you can write about things other than the usual love or depression...well done! Sarah-Lou x x x

Wow! I'm speechless. Now THAT was amazing.

Sensual with undercurrents (no pun intended) of eroticism, but nothing so flagrantly alluded that the understatedness is undone. Very nicely worked.

This was great!!! 5/5