OH, Ann! this was beautiful and sad. I hope you are ok!is there anything i can do? hang in there, sweetie! lyl!
car

Line 4: teAring (just a typo)

Nice job Ann, it's so sad with such a beautifully touched ending. 5/5

Love
Heather

Awesome! Such a deep poem,I totally enjoyed reading it! You truly wrote a wonderful poem,keep up the good work!Your poem shows you have alot of talent,and so much emotion. You expressed what you felt really well,nice use of words too! Keep the poems coming!- Love psychotic heart xox

Beautiful. great job!

Excellent. I liked the format, very touching poem. 5!

This may be my favorite that you have written so far!!! Beautiful Ann....I don't know what it's like not have myMom so I can't say I understand...I have that special bond with my mother too. It's wonderful, so I do understand that part.....Excellent write.....SMILE!! :) 5/5

beautiful , you have done a very good job writing this poem, and you have pi cked a subject that everyone on earth can relate too. the way you have described your love for your mom in this poem will inspire us all to go back throiugh the years of memories and recall all the good times with our own mothers. keep up the great work Ann love ya too huggers Harry

This is beautiful and extremely touching
-J-

Great heartfelt poem, I agree with Harry this is a subject with whom so many people can relate to.

Wonderful read!! Perfect flow from start to finish.

Your friend
Hayley

Beautiful poem. Well done

that was really sweet. i loved it. thanks for the comment on mine

awwww the poem is so pretty, but it doesn't look that you are happy...sorry.
but the poem is really good. 5/5

Beautifully written, yet so sad. I thank God I still have my mom. I don't know what I will do when she is gone. I'll probably be like you and trust the Lord to see me through.
Take care and God bless.

Wonderful piece of writing. very emotional, and touching...
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

The poem had slight flow troubles, and you could use a thesaurus. But I am sorry if you did indeed lose your mom.

I would value your input on some of my poems, if you ever find the time.

awwwh wow, that was great, its just a strong poem, good job

hey I changed my name - It's Amanda Linzi :)

How sweet. I really liked it great job:)