Comments : Jaide

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*~Tiffany C.~*~

    Very Good... expresses ur feelings hope u get wat u want

    much love

    tiff

    plz check out my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Sweet poem x

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    You are young but the way you write is really increadible
    keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sexi_Cassie

    Omg william you poem is really good omg babes it's like really really good!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    WOW william lol i LOVE this one lol comment back much love

  • 17 years ago

    by Yoshimi

    I love your poem Will!

    Luff always,
    'Sydney Lu Hu'
    Yoshi

  • 17 years ago

    by swill

    Wow william i really enjoyed that poem, jaide is a lucky girl to be loved...but its so sad too,...unrequited love is very sad indeed...

  • This is a wonderful poem William. I hope this girl/woman reads it and feels as touched as anyone else who does.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mafia Cilla

    Nice, very emotional.

  • 17 years ago

    by LoveDontLetMeGo

    Good. luv it

  • 17 years ago

    by Batman

    OMG ur amazing!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by CrysluvsBowie

    I enjoyed it :) it sounds like you are infatuated with a girl..how sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    AWww..sO nicE..~ ^^ its so swEet!~ kEep up the gOod wOrk!~ hOpe to read mOre poeMs of yours..~ ^^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MidNightBeauty

    Great poem i absolutly loved it...good luck with meeting her hun

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, The flow and Rhyme was amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by waitin for my vampire

    Its rly good i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by kellie

    Love it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by **confused**

    This poem is so good u hav alot of talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Pepa

    Creative....nice poem! GBU! Pepa

  • 17 years ago

    by *Mello Yello*

    Beauitful brought a tear to my eye.