Aww...very nicely written, beautifully sad. I know what you're referring to at the ending "it was the only choice, she shouldn't stay" , people think suicide is horrible but they just don't understand sometimes it's needed for the ones who can't fight it. It's such a sad thing to say on my part but sometimes day by day is a suffering. Anyhow, enough rambling. Nice job hun 5/5

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Heather

Oh my gosh, I cant believe what I see! I your style is just like mine! Half the stuff in your poems is like stuff I've written in multiple different poems. Weird...Neways great job! >3jess

Once again, a brilliant poem. You have an amazing talent. Well done!
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-Shell

Nice poem! I liked reading it. ^^ Comment on one of mine!