ya i decided to write a triolet because i was thinking about taking a poetry class in my senior year (thats when i have the time to) so i wanted to see what it might be like. it's cool learning this stuff from you! great poem! you must be passing this class with beauty!

~PLP~ Lil slam~ HUgs & love

Wow, you're really good at writing these different types of poems...I guess it just proves your talent...As always, keep up the amazing writing...

♥ Тǻķε Сåяε ♥
Always, Danielle.

Wow heather....that freaked me out a little bit….different from your other stuff....Will your teacher march that right to the counselor? Lol....Very well done!! Awesome job!!....5/5 :)

Heather, Sad one but beautifully done. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

i really like this though i am unsure why. Good work. Thankyou fro your comments.

Jemma

great write, i like this...especially the second stanza...amazing. 5/5

love always <33

great poem! i love it! really sad. . . but understandable. . . and yes it's okay that you used my photo. . . keep it up!

Love, Taylor

great poem, i loved it, sad, but knowing people who r cutters, talking to them, that is how they feel. 5/5
Take care

~Rae

Honestly Heather, not as cliche as you may think! Of course the whole cutting subject is sooo over done, but what can you do! Inspiration is inspiration...lol! No really I liked it, but you have yet to write anything I don't like :) Holly

That was cool and you know how to keep your poems good in a catagories. Thanks always for your comments.
~Deepthroat

Great work huni, keep your head up and stay strong, much love,
xx

this was amazing....heather i just cant put into words how much i love your poems!! they're incredible....thank you for the comment on my new poem....my endings are always weak...it really sucks....im glad im improving though...thank you bunches =)....once again brilliant poem....im looking forward to your next ....take care ~much love~ ~lots of hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Nice one heather, very well done this one too...
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit