Wow that was really good! I can really relate to what you wrote. Thank God you're not suicidal though. Stay that way! lol. Great job!

this poem is reli gud especially if ur nt reli feeling this way its shows lotsa understandin. beautifully written as usual. striking and rememberable xx

Amazing!perfect in everyway loved it...........leexxx

Good suicide poem, well done on it, keep it up, Really great work :D well done

Thats a really good poem :) espeshially for someone who isnt suicidal :) xoxoxox

That was a very sad poem! PLz dont cut ur self! 5.0 on the poem! Thanx for giving me adivce in the discussion thing (moving on...but changing?)

this is so sad, how do u no exactly what suicidal ppl feel like !?! its so good and rly affective keep it up! xxxx

A enlightining poem which gets me thinking. Just one point though the stanza which reads:

I sit here alone
And take 16 pills
Just incase
My knife attempt falls

I would have put the last line as 'My knife attempt fails' as I feel if fits the rhyme scheme better. Still worth the read though.

Stay Inspired
Nici

I re-read your poem to refreash my mind of what a good poet you are :)

I still loved it :)

And if you want me to read any others just post them in the request section under FREE RATE AND COMMENT...

love you :)^^^and pass the word xxxxxxxx