Promises

by authum darkness   Apr 18, 2005


You were always making promises
That you could never keep
You told me you loved me
But that was a lie
You told me I was the only one for you
But I knew that wasn't true
You talked about me behind my back
Telling your friends I was a loser
All you ever wanted
Was to get me in bed
Well, I'm not taking it anymore!
I can't take the lies!
I can't take the cheating!
I thought I loved you
But I guess that was a lie too!

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  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    I like this poem, it reminds me of the guy that says he loves me but he talk behind my back, well great job... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    you started whith a ryhme....where did it go? oh well ryhme would have taken away from the power and anger you potray in this poem. your flow is lost in some parts, the third line, due to a change in ryhme stands out alot. I like this poem. i truly do 4/5
    ~Breeze

  • 19 years ago

    by authum darkness

    yeah, i met someone good, but i don't know what happened?

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I can relate to this poem guys can be some real jerks! Not all but I have found a lot of them. Good job and Keep posting! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by authum darkness

    thanks! this poem was about a guy I went out with. he was a scumbag! ;)

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