Perfect Guy

by metuka   Apr 19, 2005


He just kept pushing on me and I...
I gave him the most precious thing that girl can give a guy!
He said he love me, and that our love will never die
But all it was, is one big lie!

I thought you're perfect, but I wasn't right
You forgot all your promises after that night
I have cried at day and at night
But now I decide:

I will find my perfect guy
Who'll never make me cry
And you... You just bad memory for me
That's all what you can be...

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  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I've had this feeling before, it's not great.
    It really describes your hate and love for this person without having the poem be really long.
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    Intelligent thoughts provoke me to give you a 5. However, a few grammatical corrections won't kill you. Good job though. Very easy flowing
    ~Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    aww i really like your poems alot..you are very very good. keep it up..5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem! I voted a 5..

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