This Is a really good poem. Keep it up.

woah! i love this poem! it flows so well! great job

yet another great one... go you! ^.^ lol

Amazing poem! it's so sad. beautyfully written! great job!
crystal

5/5 excellent work !!! touching !! & i can relate !!

Omgosh, its terrible. its so sad i had tears in my eyes.
the poem was awesome..rhyming and everything was perfect. good job

I love your writting, your so talented ^_^

This poem is sooo great. i loved it and i think the message is soo true and very well said through..the moral is great, keep it up!
xxx