i like it. its pretty. it really tells the truth. of course, what would happen if you did fly too high? would you...EXPLODE?!??!!?! lol. jk. i like it. amor, nancy

hey no u cannot beat actually so nerrrr. anyways about your poem twas far from perfect (hehehe) but it was alrite. xxx

God ! please please let me fly so
high ! who doesnt want to do so !?
its the best "in our dreams" LOL

i loved that message "Guide those
who have flown away" its inspirational
good work though !

: )

mate! read one of my poems titled
"No Wings Are There To Buy" and tell
me about ur opinion !

See ya

Peace
Rua Francis.

Hey Nobody !
Thanks for youe comment,it will help me "although u seemd like you were fighting or something like that" : S

still i accept your opinion.But tell you what? Who of us dont use somewords
more than one time? Don't we all ? : )

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

Your Poetry Always Turns Out To Be A Joy To Read Thanks For Sharing Another Poem Thats Worth The 5.0 I Gave xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I love this poem...it's like a lesson in modesty....How is it, Nobody, that you are so wise? Please get back to me...

Good poem and interesting idea, but it is a bit too repetitive. I figure that's sort of what you're going for, but maybe it's too much. You start branching off to broaden the idea, then suddenly--NOPE, we're back to where we were. Still good though 5/5

5/5. This poem inspired me ALOT!