Oh hun i hope she is ok! I felt like dying today cos that girl who was bullying me threw something at me in spite today and it hit me on the head. She said she didn't mean to but she aimed it at me. Really great poem though! :)

thats a really good poem. I hope she's OK though

Good poem, sorry your sister feels this way, I like the way your poems are so full of feelings and emotions, I love reading them, keep it up...

This poem grab me from beginning to end..
Honestly.It feels like I can feel the emotions you've put into this poem.
definitely a 5.
All the best to you and your family..
;-)

hey...it was really good....i can kind of relate....you have a talent
//.:amanda:.\\

Wow, I hope your sisters ok. Great write. >3jess

I really like how you ended the poem. And if this poems true I really hope that she knows you are there. It was really good! Keep Writing!
Jordan-Paige

i dont really have much to say except this is a wonderful poem full of a powerful feeling of love and concern. i do hope that both you and your sister can stay safe, strong, and healthy. 5/5
AntiSocial16
ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem, it'll help a lot when i edit it!

That is so sad, did the police really say there wasn't anything they could do! That...it just pisses me off! I hope your sister is okay though...take care of her.

Thanks every body, your comments means alot to me.....I'm still very worried about my sister, but she is ok for now!!! It's so hard to be strong for her, when I some times wants to die too....but I'm trying!!! And yes the police wouldn't help me, they got mad at me in fact!!!

Love you all....

hey I changed my name - It's Amanda Linzi :)

Well my girl, i hope your sister is doing okay now. If not - be strong. :) I'm always here if you wanna talk.
Well done <3

||Love -
Kalah.

aww this is sad.. Im sorry to hear that...

Hey if you want to see a picture of me. Jade put one on her profile. she scared me cos i dint expect my photo online! LOL!

Well done, Sabrina. I thought I voted and commented before - Sorry for delayed response.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love - Amit.

Oh that's so sad! If she only knew how much you really care! I hope everything will be ok! Good job showing your true emotions! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

I love this poem..so sad...i have an older sister n it hurts so much tht she must feel like this xxxxx brilliant xxx

:( that's really sad sabrina... I hope everything with her is better ...
thanks for the comments.. and ya my sister always wants to kill herself too.. I understand this poem as well...
great job, great flow.. 5/5

great poem.. very well-written... I voted a 5..! please check out any of my poems.. thanks a lot.. hugs

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