that's really sweet. i hope that it saved her. and i wish you luck. it was well written too. although it had a few spelling mistakes.
~Freak~

this poem is amazing its so sad n im in the same situation w/muh lil sis rite now 5/5

that is really good!!! u have a way with writing poems....keep up the good work

I really love this its so sad but so beautiful wow! 5/5

Aww This Poem Was So Sad And Sweet I Can Tell That This Was Heartfelt 2!! My Sister Use To Be Very Suicidal As Well I Can Relate 101% I Gave It a '5' xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

omg that was a great poem, i loved it, its great that u really care for ur sister like that, i have a sister to and idk what i would do if i lost her, good luck w/ everything u do, keep up the great work!

i think my sister wants to die too:'(..we can pull hthrough this together if ya want
like your poem very powerful
5/5

angel..