Comments : My sister wants to die

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oh hun i hope she is ok! I felt like dying today cos that girl who was bullying me threw something at me in spite today and it hit me on the head. She said she didn't mean to but she aimed it at me. Really great poem though! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    thats a really good poem. I hope she's OK though

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Good poem, sorry your sister feels this way, I like the way your poems are so full of feelings and emotions, I love reading them, keep it up...

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    This poem grab me from beginning to end..
    Honestly.It feels like I can feel the emotions you've put into this poem.
    definitely a 5.
    All the best to you and your family..
    ;-)

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    hey...it was really good....i can kind of relate....you have a talent
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, I hope your sisters ok. Great write. >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    I really like how you ended the poem. And if this poems true I really hope that she knows you are there. It was really good! Keep Writing!
    Jordan-Paige

  • 19 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    i dont really have much to say except this is a wonderful poem full of a powerful feeling of love and concern. i do hope that both you and your sister can stay safe, strong, and healthy. 5/5
    AntiSocial16
    ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem, it'll help a lot when i edit it!

  • 19 years ago

    by dragonfly

    That is so sad, did the police really say there wasn't anything they could do! That...it just pisses me off! I hope your sister is okay though...take care of her.

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Thanks every body, your comments means alot to me.....I'm still very worried about my sister, but she is ok for now!!! It's so hard to be strong for her, when I some times wants to die too....but I'm trying!!! And yes the police wouldn't help me, they got mad at me in fact!!!

    Love you all....

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    hey I changed my name - It's Amanda Linzi :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Well my girl, i hope your sister is doing okay now. If not - be strong. :) I'm always here if you wanna talk.
    Well done <3

    ||Love -
    Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    aww this is sad.. Im sorry to hear that...

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey if you want to see a picture of me. Jade put one on her profile. she scared me cos i dint expect my photo online! LOL!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Well done, Sabrina. I thought I voted and commented before - Sorry for delayed response.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love - Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Oh that's so sad! If she only knew how much you really care! I hope everything will be ok! Good job showing your true emotions! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    I love this poem..so sad...i have an older sister n it hurts so much tht she must feel like this xxxxx brilliant xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *liZ*

    :( that's really sad sabrina... I hope everything with her is better ...
    thanks for the comments.. and ya my sister always wants to kill herself too.. I understand this poem as well...
    great job, great flow.. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    great poem.. very well-written... I voted a 5..! please check out any of my poems.. thanks a lot.. hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    the message in my poem, Take the first letter from each sentence...