Perfect

by Princess09   Apr 21, 2005


You make me happy
you make me smile
i want us to last
longer than 1000 miles

i want you here
i want you with me
i love you
cant you see

i don't know why
but i do
it was all so fast
and brand new

you are perfect
in every single way
it was so fast
throughout the days

i don't know why
but i love you
be with me
lets no be two

so hold me tight
and don't let go
and tell me
you love me so

tell me please
i love you
because i think
i love you, too

2/18/05

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    i didn't like this one very much..it has less spelling mistakes..but it just didn't flow. i was really confused at this part "but i love you
    be with me
    lets no be two'

    um..so yeah.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    this ones really sweet :) nice work