Comments : An end to your world

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    wow. Liz deep! nice!

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Good work...You have the touch of writing good poems..
    All the best to you!...
    ;-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Frankie

    Vengeful..I like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I read this three times, and I think I get it now....Is this about you dad??? Well enethough I don't get it, I think it's very good, it got me to think lol =0) Love it, you did a great job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *liZ*

    lol no
    its not about my dad
    i have a really good dad
    this poem and the other is about my exboyfriend
    who was far older than me... and it was illegal and he did very bad things to me and treated me like hell