Beautiful agony

by bryan   Apr 23, 2005


Like the blade oh so sharp of a knife.
Twisted and pulled as it ends my life.
Slowly and torturous it puts me through agony.
Oblivious you don’t even know what u do to me.
Like it was nothing at all you walk away.
My shirt bloody as the knife remains.
The funny thing is I don’t even
care.
It’s crazy how much pain you can cause with out messing up your
hair.
Even as I stand here dying cause of you.
I’m not at all upset because I know the love is true.
You break my heart with such great style.
And i've never in my life seen such an amazing smile.
In my last dieing seconds i'd look in to your eyes.
So you can see the tears of love, not pain that I cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    This was so...wow...idk how to describe it. i love the way i can feel the emotions of this poem. it was simply amazing! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    This is a nice peom. A lot of pain I feel from you. I liked it, I liked the poem a lot. Keep it up, you're doing good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Good job on this one, I liked the flow of the poem, the topic was cliche, but I suppose that if that's the way you feel than that's the way you feel.

  • 19 years ago

    by Maddie

    Very nice, sad as it was. If i were you i'd change the name, just because Beautiful Disaster is a song.. and it would be better if it was something original. But not that important really, great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    I have to give you props to that one very well done, wrote in a victem's persepective but still well done. I hope you get around to reading some of my work I think you will find it intresting to say the least until then have a good day and keep writing...

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