Suicide

by brownie   Apr 24, 2005


She might be smiling on the outside
but she's dying on the inside
she keeps something from everyone, a secret
the secret was something she didn't regret

one day at night, out of sight
with the stars shining oh so bright
she got broken glass and try to cut her veins
even though it hurt a lot she didn't cry, for being alone does more pain

as her blood drip dropped to the ground
nothing at all made a sound
for when the blood of a mortal drips
the ground makes no sound but only sips

she lays down on the ground and closes her eyes
she thinks of all the things she heard, all the lies
she sleeps for she wants to die
as the memories fill her head she starts to cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tru

    sometimes pain is all someone knows....your talented.....

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    this poem touched me...
    thanks for commentin on mine... please comment and check out my others... thanks.

  • 19 years ago

    by brownie

    Thanks, this was my first sad poem and i did it sort of for my friend because i think she feels the same way the girl in my poem feels like

  • 19 years ago

    by Elissa

    This was awesome.. and I know how you feel. 5/5
    Love always,
    Elissa