hey thats great!i wrote a poem like that once.everything about it is clear and concise,its lkike all your words roll together!great xxx

i agree with above.. this poem is great! all the words flowed perfectly and there was not one thing i didnt like! excellent job! keep it up! :) take care

LOVE THIS POEM.... WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT. LOL
KEEP IT UP

Thats awesome hun xox