Holding on to non-existent love

by Deathcanwait   Apr 25, 2005


One kiss: I'm floating,
Another: I'm flying.
One hug: I'm so warm,
Another: I'm boiling.

One day: without you,
Is one day: to many.
One day: Ill find you,
That day: will come soon.

but you're not here.....

One loss: confuses,
Another: just bruises.
One moment: I'm alone,
I realize: that you've gone.

Form one vein: blood oozes,
I'm the one: that loses.
One day: with out you,
Is one day: too many.

One day: Ill lose you,
That day: will come soon.
One day: Ill realize,
YOU'VE ALREADY GONE!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    The style of the poem is something I've never seen before but I really liked it. I love weird stuff I guess and that kinda stuff simply happens. Thx for your comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by MEG!@$%

    That was great and I love the style that you wrote it in! Awesome job! I look forward to reading more of your poems! Would you mind reading some of mine too? That would be awesome!! Thanks!

    -:-Megan-:-

  • 18 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    :) lol, i've always just written like that :S i never really learnt. thanks for your comments :D

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