Very graphic, but i liked it! Keep writing stuff like this, it is "disturbing" but thats what makes it interesting!
Love Kt xx

DON'T DO IT! (That's what I wanted to say when I finished the poem)

Great way to bring in the reader.

Aw this is so sad...WHY DO I LOVE SAD POEMS SO MUCH....haha i loved it 5/5

Wow dats like one of the saddest poems i've ever read. hope to read more from u, u write quite well.