This is a poem that i have wrote a long time ago and i couldn't post it due to my computer being down.

It is just how i felt at the time. I hope you enjoyed it, i know my grammer sucks...but oh well..i have my faults just like everyone else.

all i see is this dark black,hand on the rail
flick open my knife and heart did impale

Love that couplet! Nice job 5/5

---Heather

that was great....but sad...keep it up =)...take care ~much love~ ~more hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

I could help you with the grammar if you wanted...it isn't too bad...and it's true, everyone has their faults. Good work.

xxx

Great poem, it was sad and I can relate to it, well, used to relate to it. I liked everything about this poem and I see nothing wrong with it. Another 5/5