this is awesome i love it this sounds so familiar

I liked it! It's my first time reading your work! I will have to read some more! Very well done I like your style! Take Care! Brooke

cool
i love it
so emotional

Tyrant of the lost hearts
You made me insane
You shattered my heart
You're the one I blame

Very powerful stanza! And thanks for the returned comment =) but what did you mean by I am always truthful about myself? ... anyway, keep in touch! 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig.

that was really really good..i loved it.. i gave it a 5/5 keep it up!

Shannon

thats real good again!!!! you're awesome!!!! had a really good flow and rhythm to it.
another fab five
-ellie

Amazing! Very well written. I love the content. 5!

True beauty; it lies beneath, but I see it.

Kalika