part two is brilliant as well, I await part three.. sorry this happened, you are such a great writer

Another sad part, the suspence is killing me! I hope you're ok, I hope it doesn't get too much worse, keep it up xxx

Very good. Sorry that happened. Still a beautiful poem.

Very good. Sorry that happened. Still a beautiful poem.

o man i have to wait? lol great job girl!

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

wow...beautiful!!!!! absolutely beautiful. im really sorry this happened. i love when you say

"My eyes are closed ever so tight.
A horrible memory comes back to me.

I thought I buried it deep…but no not enough.

To the surface it rises…I feel the pain again."

i can relate. anyways, amazing poem. can't wait to read pt. 3
-xXx-

wow...beautiful!!!!! absolutely beautiful. im really sorry this happened. i love when you say

"My eyes are closed ever so tight.
A horrible memory comes back to me.

I thought I buried it deep…but no not enough.

To the surface it rises…I feel the pain again."

i can relate. anyways, amazing poem. can't wait to read pt. 3
-xXx-

Omg Andrea, and I so sorry! I'd never want anything like this to happen to you! You're such a wonderful person! I wuv you and always will! <3 <3

~Krissy

*big bear hug*

so far both parts have been really good cant wait to read the next part
-Elissa

WOw, Andrea. This was... amazing, just like the first. YOu did an awesome job with this!!! Great write!
Car
P/S - thanks for commenting on my work. It's really appriciated!

Amazing. Can't wait till part 3. Thx for you comment.

Awe this is so sad!

Its a great write.

Jemma

*another gasp still yet louder then the other* DAMN THEM!!! those bi.tches that said such things about the ruler of the monkey nuts shall pay. . . they shall be forced to stroke them and give them their viagra everyday. . . and that guy shall learn to understand the word no when he screams no as the monkey nuts attack him rubbing their harriness all over him. . . and the supersperm shall also infect him and make him a . . .dun dun dun. . . man w.hore!. . . hehe. . . still love it keep it up!

-Big Hairy Monkey Nuts!!!

Love, Taylor

Andrea you are beautiful inside and out! No matter what ANYONE says! Don't ever take anything to heart that is not encouraging and uplifting. You are a princess! You shouldn't be treated as anything less. God loves you so much, hunny!!! Please take care and have a great night! ♥

Oh my goodness, the suspense! ugh! lol, Nicely done, Andrea hun!

Love ღ Always,
Heather M Craig

i really liked this one too... i cant wait till the next one! if ur mom really said that stuff to you... sorry but what a b**** (sorry they wont let me say it)
-Chelsea

It was wonderfully written.. I just wish it never happend to you... Keep your head up and take care (always).. Can't wait to for the next... *hugs*

*> : PainOfOne

U R NOT UGLY.. U R BEAUTIFUL.. im soo mad.. they just being dissatified of what you have(your mom or the other gals) listen, ignore them.. if u keep listen n have it in ur mind.. it will tore u down hun.. stay strong.. im waititng for part 3

xx
sheila

woah! that was like, it just left me speechless...keep up the great writing-hope to read of your work...never change!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Ur an awesome writter and im lookin forward to pt 3!. ....