You really know how to write a good one...Good work!.
;-)

you wriote as to put your blood on paper great poem

powerful poem

THis is so true. five from me

Wow..
breathtaking,great work,this one is my favourite one so far!
keep it up:)
-Lisa

Real good vocab in this one again you really choose you words carfully and i like that xxx alex xxx

This is really sweet,shows youre love for them

Hmm i never seen a poem that hits upon being a parent quite this way, i also like the way you chose to express yourself with your imagination, great work hope to see more -
raindrops 5/5

Once again you capture the meaning you wish to display and your paint it for everybody to see. the only thing i have to say is that he diffrent lenghts of the stanzas throws off the flow a little but it was great and i give it a 5.

I'm going to have to say that this is supposedly an attempt to show someone's plight in trying to show someone, probably important to them, the way to get through life.

Tell me if I got it right.
It was quite the poem.