I like how you changed point of veiws! It really made it interesting! If you would PLEASE comment/rate mine, that would be greatly appreciated!

not sure what to think of this one but its a poem that can be read and understood only by the poeple who have been through such a thing. its a great poem. i love your writing.

great wrk

That was a great poem!
Well, the whole topic wasn't great but the poem itself was.
Rape is horrible. :<

i loved it

i like how u r able to c both points of view
Luv L*J*

I like how you had both point of views, and how every line flowed so well. Well done!

Wow, that was so creative to use two sides to the story. I loved that. But that was really intense.

dam,that was hot.
-mikki

I love this poem .it's so good ..nice rhymes . So good how you put the views of both poeple in here from the situation ..I have read two of your poems and you are by far one of the best writters eheh I like your poem ... Again ,loved this keep up the awesome work .
April

Great

really interesting take on this kinda situation, nice writing

Just brilliant.

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wow being a guy i was surprised how well you portrayed the girls thoughts. From expirience I know its way more scarier and upsetting but I understand that the guy in your poem didn't mean to rape her. I think that it makes it a better poem showing his point of view not that I think was he was doing was right or anything. But i really enjoyed your poem and thought that what the characters were thinking was pretty realistic and it helps people understand what really happens and how people feel. Excellent job.

It was great how you included the two view points. Great Job!

I loved this poem. It showed both sides very well. Especially the guy who really thought he was doing nothing wrong. I think the girl would have been alot more afraid but in panic not being able to think of that so i spose you portrayed her thoughts well to:) good job.

wow.. that was a great poem! it shows how much of a conflict sex can be...

i love how you put two points of view, great poem!

I read that some where be4 I think

O MI GOD!!!!!!!! Bravo Bravo Bravo.. That S*** was on POINT ... Ya got Mad lyrics che out my poems PLZ>>>>>

WOW that was great how you added both threer views on it n how they bothe were seeing it 2 different ways
i love all your poems
keep it up
much love