Comments : Good Sex/Bad Sex

  • 18 years ago

    by Charlotte

    Wow. AMazing, excellent, awesome, so many positive adjectives to list!! The rymes made sense and rhymed!! It was so great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Eleanor

    dude...thats deep...well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    Omgosh that was really good I've written things like that where i show two sides it's very effective. nice job 5/5 luv Amy

  • 18 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    I loved this poem. It was really good, well done

  • 18 years ago

    by christina

    grt poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Todd

    omg that was a awesome poem. . . i can't believe it. . .it was worded really good. . .i'm speechless. . .keep writing you are very talented. . .great poem . . i'm gonna go read more of yours!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by broken angel

    I liked it because it showed the two sides of the story. Well done, well done. It's really unique!

  • 18 years ago

    by hidden under lies

    this was really good and its kinda like what happened to me and i was the girl so yea it kind a touched a soft spot in me. i like it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    that was quite possibly the best poem i have ever read. congratulations, you are an amazing writer. keep up the amazing work.
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by EEG

    i added you to my favorites....you have a really great talent!

  • 18 years ago

    by *YaSmIn*

    this is yet another fantastic poem...im speechless....lol...i enjoy reading ur poems soo much...i actually understood the whole story...and i felt horrible for that girl....its sad that these situations happen everyday...*5/5*
    ~*~yasmin~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this was so powerful! The way you wrote from both sides without losing the intensity show's such talent! One of the best poem's I've read like this! Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Seductive

    that was very interesting u get 5/5 i added u to my favorites, ur good, whenever u get time u should check me out.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    i liked how you used both points of veiw but it was confusing because it was everyother line and stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    nice poem. very strong. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    i agree with poetess, that it was realistic. great job. keep it up! take care. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by hidden under lies

    this is such a good poem sad but soo damn good. i think this is like my 5th time reading it. i swear you have some real talent in the way you write its unbelieveable. its excellent (check out some of my poems when you have time pleas and thank u)

    love always, savannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammy

    it was awesome how u had to points of view.. but if some dude tried to rape me they would get thur a $$ kicked and they wouldnt have a d!(k lol but keepn up tha good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Randi

    That was...my life.
    Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    woah! i like how you had the boy's thoughts and the girl's thoughts that was really orignal you are one of the best poem writers you should be really proud