Wow. AMazing, excellent, awesome, so many positive adjectives to list!! The rymes made sense and rhymed!! It was so great!

dude...thats deep...well done

Omgosh that was really good I've written things like that where i show two sides it's very effective. nice job 5/5 luv Amy

I loved this poem. It was really good, well done

grt poem

omg that was a awesome poem. . . i can't believe it. . .it was worded really good. . .i'm speechless. . .keep writing you are very talented. . .great poem . . i'm gonna go read more of yours!! 5/5

I liked it because it showed the two sides of the story. Well done, well done. It's really unique!

this was really good and its kinda like what happened to me and i was the girl so yea it kind a touched a soft spot in me. i like it 5/5

that was quite possibly the best poem i have ever read. congratulations, you are an amazing writer. keep up the amazing work.
~Freak~

i added you to my favorites....you have a really great talent!

this is yet another fantastic poem...im speechless....lol...i enjoy reading ur poems soo much...i actually understood the whole story...and i felt horrible for that girl....its sad that these situations happen everyday...*5/5*
~*~yasmin~*~

Wow...this was so powerful! The way you wrote from both sides without losing the intensity show's such talent! One of the best poem's I've read like this! Keep it up~Holly

that was very interesting u get 5/5 i added u to my favorites, ur good, whenever u get time u should check me out.

i liked how you used both points of veiw but it was confusing because it was everyother line and stuff

nice poem. very strong. 5/5

i agree with poetess, that it was realistic. great job. keep it up! take care. :)

this is such a good poem sad but soo damn good. i think this is like my 5th time reading it. i swear you have some real talent in the way you write its unbelieveable. its excellent (check out some of my poems when you have time pleas and thank u)

love always, savannah

it was awesome how u had to points of view.. but if some dude tried to rape me they would get thur a $$ kicked and they wouldnt have a d!(k lol but keepn up tha good work

That was...my life.
Great poem.

woah! i like how you had the boy's thoughts and the girl's thoughts that was really orignal you are one of the best poem writers you should be really proud