WOW....... thats all i can say...... its so crazy it happends everyday.
kayla
aka
baby-face

Wow

Dang this is a good poem!very nice written!!wow...

Great write. I got it right from the start. I think you captured what goes through an opportunist rapist head....he doesn't realize it is even rape. Again great job. I had added you to my favs before! 5/5

Wow this is really good!!!

Intense, thats all i have to say, great poem

It is sad but its good i really like the work you do

That was a fucin awesome poem! and im very sorry if this happened to u

I've actually never read a poem written about sex from two views at the same time....AMAZING. I love it. Nice and creative. I'm jealous, lol

Good Work everything just came together in that poem i really liked it. nice.

OMG, That poem what amazing!!!! Wow! I can't even say anything, I'm speechless... WOW! Good job! Great piece of work, the story is sad, but the emotion is so intense and great!
~BJ~

Truly amazing!!!! very powerful!!! check out some of mine

WOW!!!! Very powerful and touchin...... Keep it up!!! U 4 SURE have my VOTE!!!!

Great poem , Its like you know exactly whats going throgh the girls and guys mind when this happens. Lets just say you hit the ball hard. Hope youve never experienced this in either vision.
~~Sweetie

That was such a good poem i loved it... you expressed both their feelings perfectly and i really enjoyed reading it.. keep it up 10/10
xox CrAzY xox

That was an excellent good peom. bro 5/5

Awesome. its great that u added different points of view. it is always good to let the reader see what the other person is thinking. nice job. cant wait to read more.

love
hayley
ps. please read some of my poems

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im f ucking speechless lol
that was like one of the best poems ive read on here to date
like omfg
seriously it was awsum how u showed two points of view
and the flow was incredible
i could relate to this so well, i almost got raped my 3 drunk ppl before
luckily, i got away
but wow! this brought me to tears
keep up the gs work!
-Jenna xo

The rhyming was brilliant, and the two different points of view moved the poem. it was perfect. Very powerful. great write, 5/5 most definatly!

heidi may

Whoa that poem as left me speechelss awesome job