Comments : Good Sex/Bad Sex

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Very emotional lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Nymphetamine

    Very unique. Its poems like these, that actually stir up emotions in the reader, which make me want to improve my writing. Amazing job.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a touching poem that shows that no 2 people see the same event in the same way

  • 17 years ago

    by Erin

    DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMN!!! i looved it!!!! u rock. tell it how it is!!! 5/5!!! comment any of mine if u'd like. keep writting ur real talented!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel~goddess

    I love that poem!... well okay I love ALL your poems! its so freakin awesome that you have a way with words like that! god bless
    ~Hannah

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracie

    I love your work. Keep writting...

  • 17 years ago

    by *Raven Angel*

    Wow thats' good relly good!!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jane

    Wow that is a good poem, it great how you showed both sides/feeling of the situation

  • 17 years ago

    by Juanita

    Nice job of making it 2-way

  • 17 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    I've been in this situation and it was astonishing how well you captured both sides of it. It brought out every emotion. You did a very good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenny

    Wow. That was written really well. The flow worked and I just really enjoyed reading it. Is that bad? I don't know, good job though! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nanita

    OMG!!! this is so good. i love this... you're very talented.... i hope you dont stop writng... much love...
    </3

  • 17 years ago

    by Nanita

    OMG!!! this is so good. i love this... you're very talented.... i hope you dont stop writng... much love...
    </3

  • 17 years ago

    by Rach

    Love this poem, you done an excellent job with it! i look forward to reading more of your work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rach

    Love this poem, you done an excellent job with it! i look forward to reading more of your work!

  • 17 years ago

    by DREA

    W0OW...THAT WAS GREAT!! I LUV H0W Y0U PUT THE TW0 WAYS 0F THiNKiN 2GETHER iTS VERY CREATiVE!! I L0VE iT EN0UGH iT iS SAD...

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

    PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by moon

    Very good, i like how it a rap sorta type.

  • 17 years ago

    by Riffy

    This was great! I loved the way you managed to get BOTH characters to share their feelings and also create a story and make it rhyme..all at once.
    Just class!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by hidden under lies

    Omg u are my favorite poet by far....this brings back memorys...it literally made me cry...your really really good.