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Line 9 should be wHether, but other than that very original idea...5/5

Love,
Heather.

Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Great poem, a true message, keep it up xxx

I'm adding you to my favorites. You have undeniable talent for writing.

I Loved The Way You Worded This Poem 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

good poem.. u mean that people should write the truth right? i get it.. well written