this is just something i threw together. an elegy is a poem about death, and this one is about the death of chivalry and classical men. it is about how everything has changed from the days of knights and dragons to today's fast-paced world of neon lights and modern men, without dignity.

That was a great poem. And yes without god you would fall worse then you would with god. I gave it a 5!!!!!!!!!

great poem.. no 1 will be able to give you critisism on that because it was brilliant

This reads like something in an old Beat nick cafe where people read poems and snapthier fingers. Not saying it is bad but it has that flavor to it. I liked for the most part the style was unique and the message was surpisingly very clear good job...

wow.. this is very advanced writing! it sound alot like something shakespere would write, that makes it awesome! you're like, such an awesome writer! keep up the awesome work!

vedali

very good...!! 5/5 fot this one... Please check out my poem "Me Vs. The Razor Blade it would mean a lot.. hugs /september

this poem was really good...tanx 4 your comments..5/5 *mwah*

omg that was another great poem, ur an amazing writer i hope to read more of ur work soon, please rate and comment my latest "something much more"