That's sad and so well written....It really touched my heart....It reminds me of my poem "Suicide Pills", read that if you get the time....Great job with this one, I really relate!!!

Very well written, good job. I can relate. Can't wait to read more.

-no more

So sad. Well written, very emotional. Great job once again. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

wow.. that poem was so emotional. i like the "mary moon" part, it added to the sadness of it all. keep up the awesome work!

its so sad but very good, excellent job... *mwah* x)

good job... really really sad and very emotional... straight from the heart

Awww very sad but very good also. 5/5. Keep it up.. I'll read some more!

much love
savannah

The beginning was very sad, but the last lines kinda cheered me up...the "Mary Moon" lines. Nice write, keep writing.
Satuxxa

hey...it is really good...well writen...i gave it a 5/5!
//.:amanda:.\\

loved it soo much..5.5

much love
Shannon

Wow, that was really sad, and well written, really touching well done, keep writing...

awesome poem! really well ritten!
keep it up!!
plz chek out sum ov my stuff i'd luv to hear from u!!!

sad but great job alittle close to home

Ok I've already commented, But I wanted to say well done for the love poems, My comp logs me out, also you definitely don't suck, you shouldnt think that

Hey thats a brilliant poem from you. Great stuff but so sad that it brought tears to my eyes. Hope you are ok hun. Hey It deserves 100 but can't so i'll give you a 5! :)

I really like this poem. Theres alot of people on here that write about cutting but they don't really do to good of a job with it, but you did a great job. It made me feel like I was there experiencing it myself. Keep up the great work. Never give up. kilman

I just had to comment on this poem even though you hadn't requested it in the forum. It's so sad... it actually brought tears to my eyes. I would give it higher than a 5 if I could.

~ Tina

yeah it was a really good poem but if you kill yourself you wont go to heaven just to make that clear
good job lol 5/4

:'( ... i dont own words...

hey this was soo full of emotion and reli powerful. well dun it was xcellent xxx