Comments : Me Vs. The Razor Blade

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    That's sad and so well written....It really touched my heart....It reminds me of my poem "Suicide Pills", read that if you get the time....Great job with this one, I really relate!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Very well written, good job. I can relate. Can't wait to read more.

    -no more

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    So sad. Well written, very emotional. Great job once again. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    wow.. that poem was so emotional. i like the "mary moon" part, it added to the sadness of it all. keep up the awesome work!

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    its so sad but very good, excellent job... *mwah* x)

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    good job... really really sad and very emotional... straight from the heart

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    Awww very sad but very good also. 5/5. Keep it up.. I'll read some more!

    much love
    savannah

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    The beginning was very sad, but the last lines kinda cheered me up...the "Mary Moon" lines. Nice write, keep writing.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    hey...it is really good...well writen...i gave it a 5/5!
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    loved it soo much..5.5

    much love
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, that was really sad, and well written, really touching well done, keep writing...

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*battered_angel*~

    awesome poem! really well ritten!
    keep it up!!
    plz chek out sum ov my stuff i'd luv to hear from u!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    sad but great job alittle close to home

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Ok I've already commented, But I wanted to say well done for the love poems, My comp logs me out, also you definitely don't suck, you shouldnt think that

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey thats a brilliant poem from you. Great stuff but so sad that it brought tears to my eyes. Hope you are ok hun. Hey It deserves 100 but can't so i'll give you a 5! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by David Paul

    I really like this poem. Theres alot of people on here that write about cutting but they don't really do to good of a job with it, but you did a great job. It made me feel like I was there experiencing it myself. Keep up the great work. Never give up. kilman

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    I just had to comment on this poem even though you hadn't requested it in the forum. It's so sad... it actually brought tears to my eyes. I would give it higher than a 5 if I could.

    ~ Tina

  • 19 years ago

    by BloodScars

    yeah it was a really good poem but if you kill yourself you wont go to heaven just to make that clear
    good job lol 5/4

  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    :'( ... i dont own words...

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    hey this was soo full of emotion and reli powerful. well dun it was xcellent xxx