The End

by Liz   Apr 30, 2005


This is about me and my boyfriends break up.... his name is dakota... yeah and the reason that he broke up with me was because i acted differently, and i was too shy... so here it is...

Today the sad news crept up on me,

I wasn't expecting it i wasn't able to see,

although he didn't love me,

although he didn't say,

I still feel this sadness, its been a long day.

I didn't know how to take it,

I didn't know what to do,

all I did was love you!

How it felt so awkward, it didn't feel the same,

yes, I acted differently, your not the one to blame.

Because I was shy,

honestly I don't know why,

I said I wouldn't cry,

but as hard as I could try,

I was pulled down, no longer can fly,

You made me happy you made me soar high,

And as you walk by,

I felt something inside of me die,

something deep inside.

As I try to hide,

you don't care,

and I can hardly bear.

The way looked at me,

the way you held me,

the way I loved you,

the way you loved me,

I never thought there was such a man, that could make me hate him yet to him I ran.

I guess it was too good to be true,

the way that I loved you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by rrrrrrr

    Amazing! 5/5 most definiately!! Thanks for voting mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    nice work, i love it!! 5/5 keep up the great work! sam xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    hey i really liked ur poem but i found it alittle confusing...maybe im just more into the love stuff...so write more lovly poems so i can read it