Wow. You are an amazing wirter with a lot of talent. You got something going for you. I love it! ღ

<3 emma-victoria

hey this was great xxx

much sorrow...nice poem...keep it up:D

very beautiful

that was a great poem. very well written. amazing job. 5/5
crystal

wow, i am amazed that you can write like this at such a young age. wonderful emotional poem. I can't wait to read more.

wow, i am amazed that you can write like this at such a young age. wonderful emotional poem. I can't wait to read more.

Great poem, there was 4 or 5 lines that broke the flow but other than that it was great. And, in such a long poem it could matter less, almost anyways:p

Best wishes,
Patrik

The ending is sad but happy at the same time, showing the skill of the writer, you are very talented, I love this poem, 5/5

I'd say this is one of the best poems i've read...
beutifully written
u must edit it more..
nice write
is so intense
5/5
love
amy

Wow! that was amazing. lol i only came on here fora bit cus i was bored, but I think I'm gonna stay on here a bit longer cus you've inspired me. Well done :)

Wow that is really sad:'(
i loved the reptition of those two lines..awesome work.
I'm sorry if this is true, no one deserves to be treated like this. Greta poem 5/5 xoxo

Good work, well written. It has a good rhyme scheme and imagination in it.