Comments : My Unfortunate Life

  • 14 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    oh my god, I wish I could vote a million times for this! I would put a 5 each time. This really is the best poem I've read, sad, so keep your head up! I hope u become happier...!!

    + Broken Smile +

  • 14 years ago

    by Amit

    Nicely written, very well done.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 14 years ago

    by Elissa

    This was absolutly amazing tina. I loved it! Im always here if you need someone to take to so you know.
    Love always,
    Elissa

  • 14 years ago

    by JLT

    Dude your poem kicks A S S!! I love it! I wish i could write that good! You rock!
    -Jessica

  • 14 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow, that was just amazing, very emotinal and sad. I really loved these lines:

    Lost in my own world
    Lost inside my head
    I'm alive and I am breathing
    I live as if I'm dead

    I can totally relate to them. I sure hope that you are ok?? Great poem, you really got your feelings out in it!!

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 14 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    excellent *does that mr burns things with his hands*
    ~Freak~

  • 14 years ago

    by Chasity

    READING THAT POEM MAKES ME WANNA CRY AND JUST GIVE U HUG. I THINH UR A VERY GOOD WRITER PLEASE KEEP WRITNG UR GOOD , CHAS OH PLS VOTE AND COMMENT ON MINE TO THANKS!

  • 14 years ago

    by meg

    this is beautifully written.. stay strong.. 5/5..
    ~bunches of luv~
    xx-meg<3

  • 14 years ago

    by Silence

    I have been reading all of your poems. I want you to know I am here for you, even though I don't know you. You are VERY talented, and I admire that you still have the strength to go on after your loss and all of the pain. I hope I am not reminding you of it as I type this. I want you to be happy. When I first came to this site, I was a depressed cutter who wanted to die. But now, I realize that others are worse then me, and I am much better now. Please if you have time read some of my poems. THey are about how my best friend and I are no longer friends. It is because of her I wanted to die. But enough about me, I just want to say Good luck to Steph and you must miss Danielle greatly.

  • 14 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    You are so talented. I hope you enter these in contest or something. Your poems just have this incrediable feeling to them...This passion. I don't know. It's just amazing. I guess its because they are true and real. It was a great poem. IN a very sad way it was amazing

  • 14 years ago

    by Greta Miller

    That was an awesome poem! keep it up! 5/5, if you have a chance could you check out my poems?

  • 14 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey that was really good.. i loved how you put the title at the end of the poem.. it really made the poem complete.. and it made me as a reader know that you really mean what you wrote in this poem.. very well written.. bye bye EJ

  • Really great poem hun, i hope your okay! im so sorry about your friends who killed themselves, u must be going thru the hardest time of your life! please don't end you life b'coz im sure they would want u 2 live it 4 them....i luv u lotz....hugz and kisses

    maddison xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    I'm speechless tina. this poem is amazing!!! i'm so glad that you changed your mind about commiting suicide. i'm hear for you if you ever need me. luv ya ~lex

  • 14 years ago

    by MISSING HIM

    THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD!!!! YOU ARE REALLY A TALENTED WRITTER!!!! LOOK I KNOW WAT UR GOING THROUGH AND IT SUCKS BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN THERE.. ALL I CAN SAY IS STAY STRONG AND I WISH YOU THE BEST IN LIFE!!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    Wonderful poem,
    so moving, you realy do have a superd talent that you are so lucky to have, you write with such passion and emotion, its hard not to cry knowing that you are feeling so...lost
    keep strong,i truly hope things start to look up for you soon, just remember,things must get worse before they start to get better...and i think youve been through the worst.
    When your'e feeling down and alone, come on this site, WERE ALL HERE FOR YOU!!!!!
    Keep writing,
    be safe
    love and hugs
    trixie xxooxx

  • 14 years ago

    by ::bRITTANy::

    U make me cry!! awesome!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kim

    I really love your poems. that's sorta the way i feel except, i can't bring myself to cut i'll just regret what i've done. i hope your ok.

  • 14 years ago

    by demongoddess120

    I've reas alot of your poems, and i've started to draw a picture for you. if i can email you, i'll send it to you. i only hope that you will stay alive! life is hard to live, but you don't have to kill yourself! i might be young, but i know your pain, you can always talk to me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sammy

    Holy crap thats so good! i hope that you feel better about your life