by matthew+haillz=forever Apr 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
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I love to have fun. |
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Thts cool short but sweet |
by Christie
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Quite a sweet poem, and i can relate to ur writing. =) good structure, a good flow, 5/5 |
by Laura
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Short...but sweet |
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Thats so sweet well written |
by Luke
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It's Short.. But The Way You've MAde A New Line For An Ending.. Really Makes the Poem Flow Really Well.. Try And Make An Even Longer Poem.. With the Same Design.. And It'll Get Top Marks. :D 5/5 Anyway. |